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Post by anycent on Jul 16, 2009 11:27:21 GMT -5
OOC:Thank you for explaining. BIC: "I meant when school is over." "Rick continued to flip throgh his notes. "Then the bell rang for next period." "Come on alex we'll be late for reading class."
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Post by Alex on Jul 16, 2009 14:42:52 GMT -5
OOC|| Then it would seem that the next thing to work on is your use of quotes. Rick didn't say "then the bell rang for the next period", so therefore it wouldn't be in quotes. And same thing for the sentence before that.
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"Aah, that should be fine, then. But we'll have to make sure that none of the sports teams are meeting after school, otherwise it'll be hard to shift without them seeing." Alex's voice had lowered to a very quiet whisper, making sure that no one could hear him.
The bell rang, signaling the end of the class period, and he gathered his belongings, following Rick out of the classroom. "Right behind ya," he called.
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Post by anycent on Jul 16, 2009 20:02:38 GMT -5
OOC: Ok I thoght I was using quotes very well. BIC: Rick quickly walked over to the reading room with alex. He sat down in his chair and took out his reading books. "Ok class today we will be reading Romeo and Juliet."
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Post by Alex on Jul 16, 2009 21:41:24 GMT -5
OOC|| In that last post, not at all. This one is good, though.
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"Romeo and Juliet is a really good book," the boy commented, scavenging around for his copy of the play. He found it in his backpack and pulled it out, carefully opening the book to the scene that they were going to read today. "I wonder if we'll be allowed to act it out for the class, like we did yesterday?" He asked curiously, trying to glimpse the teacher.
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Post by anycent on Jul 19, 2009 12:12:54 GMT -5
OOC:Good. BIC:Rick flipped throgh his book up to the balcony scene. "I hate classical plays."
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Post by Alex on Jul 19, 2009 15:10:33 GMT -5
Alex let out a quiet laugh. "I know what you mean, but it's a famous play. You have to think: it can't be THAT bad if it's remained one of the world's most well-known plays ever written." He, too, opened up to the balcony scene and skimmed the lines. It didn't seem like it would be that horrible. But he knew that some of the kids in the class would point out all the little details about the scene and make it drag on and on and on...
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Post by anycent on Jul 19, 2009 17:15:13 GMT -5
"Yeah well I know." "Maybee in 500 years star wars will be in lititure Text Books."
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Post by Alex on Jul 26, 2009 7:07:07 GMT -5
Alex laughed out loud, proceeding to slap a hand over his mouth and try to smother his fit before the teacher heard him. "That would be HILARIOUS, man," he snickered, imagining the characters speaking in Old English, with those accents, and the same clothing as in Shakespearean times. It made one hell of a mental picture.
He glanced up cautiously to see the teacher looking around the room, and buried his nose in his book to avoid being caught.
OOC|| Sorry for taking to long to reply. I was on vacation, and am leaving again tomorrow morning for yet ANOTHER vacation.
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Post by anycent on Jul 27, 2009 11:03:52 GMT -5
OOC:Wow, this is kind of ironic because my freind from another RPG bord when to the phillpines for vacation and I have'nt heard from him in 2 weeks. "Well I guess its ok." After a couple more classes and lunch time the bell rang." "Ok Alex lets go out side and have some morphing fun!" Rick looked out the window and there was no one on the baseball dimond so we were safe to morph.
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