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Post by -иoxx on Dec 3, 2010 23:15:35 GMT -5
name: kyle netic (kysnetic;kyns) age: eighteen gender: male orientation: gay guild: assassins shapeshift form: weasel appearance: human;; [ref] head is doused with silky smooth dark black and blue locks, depending on what lighting your in. eyes are a deep brown, sometimes blending in with the black pupil to make them look like a black void. skin of a pale shade, with petite flawless lips. body of a slender proportion. height is at five feet, four inches with the ever so famous 'teenage boy metabolism' to match. keeping his sides slender, but not without muscle. more of any strength is there but not seen until flexed, and not felt until touched. all that should belong to one of a younger age, but marked on this late-teen. the mark, the tattoo, located on his ankle. size of a quarter, in a deep navy blue. general clothing comprises of deep blue, black, purple and a 'dark' color spectrum of hoodies. jeans and cargoes come in the same color scheme, with a dash of white here or there, and upon his feet are black and white converse. very ordinary, and nothing too extraordinary about it.
shifted;; [winter][summer i ii] a weasel, to be precise a long-tailed weasel. this species acquires a small head with long whiskers. elongated body, neck, with short yet accurate legs. a long slender tail that is equivalent to the length of the body, tipped with black in all seasons. during the summer season, pelt is a soft tan, where as the chin, chest, and underbelly is a light golden brown. during the winter season, brown pelt molts into an especially extravagant white fur; which changes back to brown as spring turns the corner. as in human form, eyes are a deep brown but appear a beady black. long-tailed weasels, in the wild, can climb trees, are adequate swimmers, and have slender bodies to chase prey down burrows. all very useful skills for living in the city.
personality: around strangers;; this boy with such a entangled and demented past, is naturally untrusting of everyone upon first encounter. but as you can only meet someone once it isn't much of an issue. for in reality, no one really knows the demeanor of an individual until personality can be divulged. in response to this natural lack of trust, he is quiet upon first impression. for anything he says could potentially be used against him in the end. to protect himself, an emotional shield is drawn out of no where, where he can recoil. a turtle inside his shell, retracting his head before the danger actually appears. eyes directed down at the pavement, bursting to blossom.
around acquaintances;; though he appears to be, at second impression, this strange individual that is actually quite stubborn and a bit of a toughie. not afraid to speak his mind, will lay down the law even if he can't back-up that law. for being such a delicate being, he sure has a mouth when he wants one, and an act to boot. being fragile, you'd think he'd avoid trouble, when in reality he seeks it out even if loosing is inevitable. this behavior proves he's comfortable around person(s) in question. though with not all candy canes and lollipops, stubbornness is as much a blessing as a sin.
the real him;; oh sure, he can put on an act, do a little dance, and put up an emotional shield. but pushing all of those facts aside, he's a masochist. logically explained in his past, instead of developing a fear of pain, it's quite the opposite; and with a low pain tolerance he loves it. seeking out highly sadistic and abusive partners, almost never trusts them or has any ounce of affection for them. it's all pleasure, self satisfaction for such a torturing fetish. assassins is a guild in which this boy has a certain need for. relying on them more than he'd wish to, though useful all the same. another quirk, one that defines him better is his overwhelming knowledge of weapons. guns, knives, arrows, crossbows, swords, and anything else you can think of that is relevant in this day and age along with some history. it marks his place in the hierarchy, as the one with excessive knowledge of weapons, and where to find them.
history: ages 0-8;; young kyle netic was born to a father shifter, and a human mother. father had only one reason in mind for producing an offspring, and that was to create another shifter in the world. though father stuck around and tolerated mother for six years, before he left the two in the dark, as kyns had not shown the slightest ability to shift. mother was a decent mother, but she just didn't seem to care sometimes. more concerned with herself and how she'd make it through life rather than her son. but stating this makes her sound neglectful, which she wasn't, that was just kyns observation of his own mum. but until a quite unfortunate event came along, they did activities that any mother and young child would. beach in the summer, playing in leaves in the fall, wrestling with other children, fishing in the spring, for mother was a mother and a father and she took her responsibilities was such. with such callus, it was something that seemingly prepared the child for later life.
at eight years of age, mother had acquired a boyfriend. he was financially well off, and was willing to support them as a little family. though this so called boyfriend turned out to be a very sick and twisted man, the only man that seemed to be burned to the inside of kyns's eyelids. this man raped kynsnetic as a young child, and afterward beat him violently. these episodes soon became something that was normal in every day life, and this torture continued for several more years.
ages 9-14;; the torture of mother's boyfriend continued for years to come. this cruel treatment explains kyns's sexual orientation for later years to come. it wasn't as if it was his exact choice either, horrified by the fact that he was violated at such a young age, fetal'ed positioned at the though. a homophobe at a young age, turned into a homosexual in later ones. with his ability to draw an emotional shield if he needs one. to go into almost an internal coma, having pain strike through his body at every second, but to not have his mind in the psychological torment. in a way, it saved the boy from corruption, but it was also some of the worst years of his life. at age nine, after a particularly harsh beating, the child recoiled in a corner and shifted for the first time. wishing he could just disappear, turned into a tiny brown weasel, another form of escape if he ever needed one from that monster. though if mother knew of this treatment, she ignored it completely. only in for the money that he brought in. but never once did the child complain, and silently took it all without a word.
at age eleven, the boyfriend left, was kicked out, or had simply lost interest. for he never came to the run down house that kyns occupied. it was a relief, but also a constant fear of not knowing where the twisted individual had gone, why he had left, and why he'd be back. but, he never came back, and kyns grew up with something like a sigh of relief. though due to the sudden cut of money, life was hard, and with a mother who only cared for herself. certain restrictions were made. kynsnetic was made aware that as soon as he turned fourteen, he'd be kicked out to live life on his own. so when fourteen did roll around, mother kept her word and he was out in the big bad world all by himself.
ages 15+;; out in the world by himself, and in his second year of high school, decided to move in with one of his schoolmates. parents were hesitant, but nodded their approval in the end. kyns earned his keep, and was more of a cleaning lady than an actual family member. always with an awkward air, it wasn't exactly a place you could call home, but it was a safe haven. sixteen years of age marked his first job, as a cashier at a hunting store. at this age of sexual rioting, kyns obviously pushed past his younger trauma and dated quite a few girls. though when it came to bed, he was simply impotent to woman. tormented from the fact, soon became harassed by a girl in question informing her posse of his mishap. developing a rage inside him, as well as a reluctance to go gay. almost in denial, but as he'd already been exposed to it, it seemed the logical thing to do with such tumbling sexual excitements. almost seventeen, kyns got into a fight at school. it wasn't bad, but enough to get him kicked out for ten days. this suspension caused his current foster family to discard him like trash not wanting to have anything to do with violence.
so with no where to go, turned to the hunting store that held some compassion. dropping out from high school, the store promoted him to work with the guns, crossbows, and similar weapons. there he was an apprentice and learned about all of their stock. this sparked his fetish, and between ages seventeen to current, read and learned all he could about weapons. shooting ranges, articles, books, black market, illegal trade, anything and anything. though as good things happen, something bad must follow. the store closed due to a death in ownership and the heirs not wanting to take over the family business, so they just closed it down without a second thought.
jobless, soon-to-be-homeless, and still with certain needs and this ability that he didn't understand, kyns followed his instinct now that nothing held him back. traveling a few hundred miles to end up in shelpey, where he sensed the other shifters. that was when the assassins found him, and he found the assassins.
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Post by Sinneh on Dec 5, 2010 17:23:53 GMT -5
mmmmm Kyrian likes >3
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Post by -иoxx on Dec 6, 2010 21:26:36 GMT -5
i made this uke so kyrian and chex could go steady yet still satisfy my inner slut xD
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Post by .: T O K I :. on Dec 10, 2010 0:20:26 GMT -5
Gotta write this quick:
More on his actual appearance (especially body build), less on his clothes. Personality needs to be edited, seems too... all-around. He's shy, quiet, and untrustworthy, yet "the biggest masochist you'll ever lay your eyes on"? He needs weakness.
His personality. Maybe it's just me, but if you're raped by a guy, I'm pretty sure he'd lean AWAY from guys. Besides, not being... er, not sure what's called (not to be rude to gays), but all you seem to EVER make is gays and bi's. Maybe a bit of diversity? His history looks okay. Very cliche' though, again more diversity. I'm not asking you to completely change it, but it's not original or interesting. He was raped and abused, neither parent cared for him, and of course he turns out like... well, an evil bastard (which most of your characters are "bastards"). I could be wrong, but aren't all of them Assassins too?
So again, change it. More originality, diversity, and difference.
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Post by -иoxx on Dec 10, 2010 2:49:06 GMT -5
uggg but having straight characters is never fun toki!!! ♥♥ you should know me by now. alright; i'll be beefin' my baby boy up. -vigorously edits- and though it'd be nice to have a theif or a straight character; they are my characters if choose to edit them so.
-explained his orientation better in age 15+ -added mild body build to physical -attempted to make him less 'polar opposites' with personality -made mother more caring ♥ because she really is
and.my.thief.is.a.rhino♥
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Post by .: T O K I :. on Dec 10, 2010 18:01:24 GMT -5
Lawl, then don't make him straight. Work on everything else I said, mainly the personality though. That's the real problem what I see. As for your list...
- good - good - Personality needs work still, I can hardly tell it's edited at all. - Work on the history more. It's like you just added in that his mom was nice, but didn't actually think about it. If she's so motherly and really cares, WHY did she kick him out? If she REALLY cared, and she "might have" known about the rape, why WOULDN'T she say anything? If she cared, wouldn't she care about her son's emotional... whatever, instead of money?
And of course, I forgot to mention earlier. I know you can have good grammar Noxx, and I'd like to at least see more it. XP As pretty as no capitals might seem, it might be annoying to others. Maybe in your bio. that's fine, but in role play.
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Post by -иoxx on Dec 10, 2010 20:33:12 GMT -5
but i never use capitals >P unless i'm either screaming, yelling, or doin' some smiley face.
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